Saturday, April 30, 2011

JUST A PROPOSAL....

                                                                                    "Will yu marry me???" 
Twilight it was ...on a sweet sunset spot,kneeling down,with a ring in his hand 'he' dared n asked 'her'..the adrenal rush in his blood rose higher...
Time seemed like it had frozen..his eyes were locked in hers...a curvy wisp of  her hair, blocking the beautiful view at times...Godddd,the make up must relli be jealous of 'her',cuz' she doesn't need one...
'She' meant, more of an angel to him..remembered the 1st time, 'he' saw 'her' in the college two wheeler parking...She must be a Goddess...
But today, everything was at stake....Their friendship, to be precise..'He' was in extreme frenzy to hear the words from 'her'....  just thn..

WAKE  UP SID,SAARE PAL KAHE...
WAKE UP SID ,CHAL KAHI CHALE..!!!!!!
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Off with a bang 'he' woke up....DREAM it was.....!!!!!
With a smile,'he' snoozed his alarm n went back to sleep ,hoping to get back the answer to his life-dependent question....

"Yu,are the most beautiful thing dat has happened to me dear..Needless to say,I consider myself tremendously fortunate..I ssssssswear i do..."
To kill time,'he' sought this way...'his' heart rose,pounding with double the rate...'he' was about to get the answer awaited...

There, 'she' stood,resting left hand on 'her' right..eyes still locked in 'his'....'he' was one of the gud frndsss 'she' ever had..shared everything,'she' wished..he was 'her' shoulder whenever needed...but this(proposal) altogether was a diffferent thing....Just  thn ,wen each thing seemed perfect...,'He' saw a tiny drop rolling down 'her' cheek.....and finally 'she' began...

WAKE  UP SID,SAARE PAL KAHE...
WAKE UP SID ,CHAL KAHI CHALE...

Goodnesss gracious sakes alive !!!!!!!....noooooooooooooo....nt now...
.'he' banged his phone...saw it splitting into two...the phne's battery flew out like nevva before....
Godddd,this is nt fair....nopes,nt at alll....!!!!!!!

Without caring any further, 'he' hit the bed again...but to no avail....'he' cudn't sleep....
Why??? what made her cry..??? was it out of happiness..or was it the other way...???  
It remained unanswered...

Dreaming, yu were mate..!!!!!  get up nw n get to work...(his heart said..)with all the effort 'he' strecthed  out his hand,and pulled the chair and wheeled it to the bathroom to freshen up...'he', was differently abled,lost his legs in an accident recently....

10 min later...
A girl,26,stepped in the hospital room with flowers in her hand...kept it on the table beside his cot and waited...what on earth happened here.?? seeing the broken phne 'she' exclaimedd...wheeling back towards his cot  now,'he' saw 'her'...
time froze again....deja vu....'his' eyes locked with 'hers'....a curvy wisp of her hair, blocking the beautiful view at  times...
I wish I cud pay the price for this dear,i relli do...thought she.. feeling very guilty n sorry for his fate...A tear rolled down her cheek....
 
5 days ago...
Twilight it was,beside a sunset spot,'he'waited for a friend,very close friend..'he' was rehearsing the scene in his mind that was to take place there..and suddenly wen 'he' was admiring the ring in his hand ,felt a blow...A car slammed  hard  into him from behind...made him rose to almost a single storeyed level...bang!!!!!! his body hit the ground.....To his utter surprise,it  was his same friend,whom 'he' was to meet dat evening...and 'She 'was the one, who rammed her Chevrolet on his Hero honda that day.!!!!!!!
Blood and cries filled the atmosphere....many more couples sighed seeing the heart wrecking scene..and hugged each other out of fear n worry...!!!!!

That Ring, 'he' had brought for her,disappeared then,at the accident spot itself...'he' cud nt win in front of the DESTINY...LIFE this is!!!!! thought he,feeling helpless,he came back to senses,recollected himself and courageously, "HEYYYY ,MORNING !!!!",wished her wit a smile..!!!!!  He loved her more than anything else in the world...Helpless, he stood there...waiting.......n wat else,cud he do..???!!!!!!!!!
Silence...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2 comments:

  1. Wat the,,,, I mean thats soo.... well writteen... the flow was awesome ,,, i KINDA GOT TRANQUILIZED,,, to know wat.. next..
    Great piece of work.. keep it up1!

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  2. Awwwwww....thnk yu so very much Kari...
    :)

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